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Sad world outside her window

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Image size
2731x4096px 10.07 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 7D
Shutter Speed
1/100 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Mar 9, 2015, 5:08:32 PM
Sensor Size
12mm
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

As I just wondered if I could write how I feel about this work, I can write a critique!!
The title and the colors of this photograph seem to exactly illustrate what you were trying to say. As the woman wears colors, her dress seems "silent" but the little touch of the flowers in her hair show life. Moreover, her gestures are pure delicacy, coordinated with the details of her back and her hair again. The whole image seems silent and represent (for me) the image of sadness. Though we can make a clear difference between the sad but beautiful outdoors and the silent and delicate indoors.
The only thing that disturbs me a bit is the composition. The windows seem odd, and I understand that the birds are necessary but I feel as if it was frame just a little bit different, it would maybe make it even better.
Continue doing this amazing work! And I hope this helped you a bit!