I love this photo, I just wish that the model had made her hands more graceful. Other than that this photo is magnificent! I love the red dress playing off of the red lips. Her blue eyes make the dark shadowness pop wonderfully. I like the fact that her makeup isn't over powering on her eyes, it's simple and beautiful. This photo is beautiful, you can feel and sense her fear and pain that she is feeling. Beautifully done! I hope to see more like this from you. I usually do not like an open mouth but I think that she looks better with her mouth open, it leaves to the imagination why her mouth is open.
I like the hands the way they are. You see so many models with unexpressive hands and bodies, being a soft, elegant version of fear that you can only see in their eyes. It's becoming a standard for these kind of gothic photos. This photo stands out, able to retain the beauty of the dress and model but shows the earthy reality of terror throughout her body language. Honestly, I see the terror in her face, but I feel it in the curvature of her back and the strained position of her hands.