"Come see inside my bones" - I apologizes in advance this is my first Critique, but thought I would try. In terms of the composition. I like that the main figure is off center but also is not following rule of a thirds. The colour palette of the image, and dark contrasted to the right draws you into the picture. The slim model works well with the background verticals. The frosted look to the image is something myself cannot get right in my head for pictures I have done as well. Half me wants to love the look, the other have dislikes it preferring clarity and crispiness. I guess its good to use if it adds to the concept of the work, here I think it does. I think I would have tried to more sharping of the focal point of the models hand, but its hard to know, without trying. In any case I'm kind embarrassed to Critique the work of someone of your caliber, but thought I should try in order that I think harder about compositions and my own attempts.
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Very beautiful photo. So much emotion in it. It's almost like exhaustion. Lovely.
Eta prekrasnyy fotografiya otlichena zdes' -
. strong enough .. strong enough .
the flare of gold on ears nose and breasts
the lettered red strength of one
and black bloomed elegance of other
arms open where you might rest
hip to neck swarms hues of blue and gray
trace their flight in delight
this impatient heart's blood rush
are you ... as strong ... as I to stay?
stolen shred of Bristol surface found wadded in Amanda's bin of throw-away © 2014
Image: “Come see inside my bones” by :iconNataliaDrepina: © 2013
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moi izvineniya za moy uzhasnyy russkiy
your work is always so beautiful ...